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chapter 4: Where the end begins The breeze brought the scent of pine needles to her before she got off the train. She touched the bark of a tree.
The breeze suddenly picked up. Her eyes did not widen in surprise this time-- they stayed solidly open as she saw a shadow form in front of her. She had time only to jump to the side before the tree whose bark she had touched was impaled by a sword-- his sword. The tree quivered, sighed, and then there was nothing where it once stood.
His eyes met hers.
She ran.
She knew how he fought. Everything about Darus-- the timbre of his voice, his unforgiving eyes, his majestic fighting style, his laugh-- everything came fl

Odyssey into 2012 chapter six: The Zephyr KeyKaylin struggled with doubt. The fear of what she had done set into her thoughts, piercing her with worry. She knew Darus would fight her at every turn, but she had fought off herself from different dimensions. She had absorbed their knowledge, turning it into her own strength.
Powers stronger than any she'd ever known now coursed through her. She knew that this was not Zephyr. She'd absorbed the powers of alternate dimensions. Notus, Boreas, and Eurus. These three powers had been added to hers, and it frightened her.
The light train struggled against her. Darus was trying to fight back. She concentrated her powers, all four, into the nex

Odyssey 2012 Chapter 5: The Rainbow ConnectionThe Light Train took on a new timbre around her. Her knowledge unlocked, she did not ride, but drive. The Train bent around to her command. She yelled in triumph! Backwards, to before it began. She could stop him at the start. Kaylin steered the Train, her body, soul, one with the Light. Then it fought her, bucking and twisting.

Her eyes opened. Kaylin wasn't alone. She was there. Kaylin, in purple. Kaylin, in green. Kaylin, in blue, yellow, orange, and violet. Each one steering, fighting. Yellow died first, a possible future snuffed out, and it's Light joined the Train. The others, alerted to the danger, fought back, but her Zephyr sang as

Labyrinth of Dreams - Midnight OdysseyAnother clumsy jump and a stumble with outstretched arms...... Kaylin was back on the train. "Light is faster than words" the book had said, and she swore it was being cynical. "But not thought!" she shot back. That should shut it up for awhile.

They said the Light Train waits for no-one, but it waited for him. Or as long as the speed of light can wait. But it was enough for Darus. And as soon as he stepped in she knew the threshold had been crossed. She was no longer safe. The traps were set. The game had begun.

Her mind was invaded. He brushed everything aside light as a wind,

The Zephyr Key's Host Kaylin struggled with all her might to keep the light train under her power as she willed it to continue on with the correct gates. The use of her power was draining most of her energy and now she stood at the front of the train, beads of sweat rolling down her neck and back. She gasped out once, forgetting to breathe because she was concentrating so much. She balled her fists tightly and then she saw a light ahead, relieved to find the next gate.
Kaylin collapsed, exhausted, and knelt down as the light train turned brighter and brighter . . .
She found herself in a dark forest. Coldness wrapped around her swiftly, making her shiver. The

The End and The BeginningNow is now.
Kaylin is stepping off the Light Train. Its dark and the dry wind scratches at her face. It's the one place that doesn't come to mind when you think of New Year's Eve.
In front of her blooms a different kind of darkness. It's wet and humid. She turns around and Darus is there.
"This is it," he says. "The final gate. The last trial." He spreads his arms, and the wet warm dark spreads out and presses against her dark. He pulls his sword out of the scabbard. Kaylin stands in front of him, tensed to run.
"Running again?" He flourishes his sword. It's giving him an unfair advantage. The sword disappears.
"You should sacrifice you

Odessey Into 2012 Chapter 2: Just like old timesThis isn't the Tokyo she remembers.
The hilltop view is chaos. Fires consume miles around, wind stirs the fumes, skyscrapers crumble. She gasps. Memories, however scattered, tell her this is wrong. They fixed this. Prevented this.
Hadn't they?
She'd made a deal once to forget all this, to move on. Was her mind clearing?
Behind her, a rustle. A man. Tall fit. Dressed simply, holding a tattered book.
"Who are you?" She steps back.

"I trained you. We were... partners. For a while..."
"...Jackson." She eyes the city. "Didn't we... fix this?"
"We did. We fixed everything, actually."
"What happened?"
"Darus."
"What?"

"You left. We made the world perfect. Fixed history. Then sat. We had thought we were working towards going home. Cycles passed, Darus soured, believing we were all fated to traverse the gates without true course, forever. But you... You left with the only ticket out. Then Darus devised a plan: undo some of our greatest repairs…"
"And bring me back…"

Chapter 1: Odyssey into 2012It's static --

trapped between her fingers, buzzing in her ears.
A heartbeat lost in the echoes of her rib cage.
And yes, of course: the intermittent pounding, the thundering, the rush of blood through her veins.
Was that fear?

She'd once been foolish enough to believe that no one could lure her in to this. A ribbon of smokescreen smiles, flashes of deceptive lies, and she was sold for the price of forever. As the cold air smacks into her face and turns her hair to tangled strands, she struggles to maintain her hold on the tattered calendar. It's ripped from the wall, December 2011 in bold Serif typeface filling the upper left corner. Eight dates circled in red. Eight trials, none of them easy, and her mouth runs dry at the thought. She folds the calendar and slips it into the right pocket of her jeans.

The scribbles of "Zephyr" and "Tokyo", etched so hard onto t

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So this is my chapter 5 entry for the very interesting challenge thing over here
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I had this mostly done a while ago and was kind of sitting on my laurels, then realized when the deadline was and had to rush it out.

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~micQuestion Jun 27, 2012 General Artist

DAYUMN, Sean! Iunno what's goin' on here, but you did a great job! Terrific composition and that's the hottest female I've seen you draw yet! (Oh gosh, I hope she's not underaged or I'll feel creepier than usual.)

Peace.

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*SeanMcFarland Jun 27, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Ha! I don't think her age was ever mentioned, but I assumed she was legal- so no worries!

It was for a jam thing a while back [link]

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~micQuestion Jun 28, 2012 General Artist

That's a relief!

And very cool! Congratulations on landing Chapter 5!!

Well-deserved!!

Peace.

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~Emmysarus May 3, 2012 Student Writer

very creative!

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*SeanMcFarland May 3, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you!

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~KaiDarknight Jan 1, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

beautiful and dynamic artwork

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*SeanMcFarland Jan 3, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you!

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~KaiDarknight Jan 3, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

you're welcome

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~Coyotmar Dec 29, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

CONGRATULATIONS!!!
Great Illustration, very fluid and Dynamic.

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*SeanMcFarland Dec 29, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you! That's what I was shooting for!

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